Hello friends, it’s your old pal Deaddie here. I see that there are some new members of the library and we are so glad to have you here. When I first published Sessions it was without an editor, or really having run the story by many people, and it’s challenging to say “hey, would you read through my femdom love story and let me know if there are any issues with the writing or plot?”

Side note: ther are some IRL supporters of the story who are helping bring Sessions to a wider audience and I will share that update later this week – Deaddie

As such, I have gotten some pushback about how exactly Craig comes to be enslaved by the Seven Deadlies. The lack of consent and especially the drugging / roofie’d scene was a stumbling block for many readers’ ability to enjoy subsequent sex scenes. While I love some good CNC storytelling, it was notable that the criticism came from both vanilla readers and experienced BDSM players.

So I’ve been thinking about the catalyst issues, and have come to the conclusion that the BDSM play that will occur between Craig and each member of the Seven Deadlies does not require a non-consensual plot element. Therefore I am rewriting and re-drawing SO MANY pages of Max’s first meeting with Craig which she recounts to Victoria at the sake bar.

The first part of the rewrite is here: https://deaddiemercury.com/comic/233/

It’s important to note that character backstories and relationships that I reveal in this rewrite were already planned to play out over dinner conversations in the Astoria House, so the “rewrite” is not total. I’ll publish these pages and then continue the story where we left off.

If you love the original CNC storyline I can provide a copy of the artwork upon request.

Thank for reading and until next time, be good to yourself.

Deaddie